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      War Of The Worlds

      War of the worlds




      Index

      Chapter 1:Page 1
      Chapter 2:Page 1
      Chapter 3:Page 2
      Chapter 4:Page 2
      Chapter 5:Page 3
      Chapter 6:Page 4
      Chapter 7:Page 5
      Chapter 8:Page 9
      Chapter 9:Page 9
      Chapter 10:Page 10
      Chapter 11:Page 11
      Chapter 12:Page 12
      Chapter 13:Page 13
      Chapter 14:Page 14
      Chapter 15:page 15
      Chapter 16:Page 17
      Chapter 17:Page 17
      Chapter 18:Page 19
      Chapter 19:Page 20
      Chapter 20:Page 21
      Chapter 21:Page 22

      Prologue


      The icy rain droplets poured relentlessly on the ruined atheneum, the water pooling up in the gashes and cuts in the rock, battle scars that were likely never to heal. The patrol slowly made their way through the ruined city of stone and brick. The buildings were falling apart, second floors that had caved inwards, walls blown out, eventually, part of the cliff had given way and rolled down the hill in the avalanche of rock an debris and stone. Looking over his armored shoulder, the commander saw a ragged blue hat with gold trim. It looked like the owner was running then abruptly fell over. There was a wall of rock and jagged stone jutting only inches away from where it lay. Looking more closely, he saw a iridescent blue sword half buried in the rubble. Almost as if owner lay right behind it, as if he was still there right now. Not a very pleasant thought. Looking over his shoulder once again, he murmured to the man behind him. “Glad this is almost over. I hate these wretched night patrols. Not like were going to find anything in this rain anyway.” He grumbled.

      The man chuckled and simply replied. “I’m with you on that one my friend. All this rain is starting to get to me. I swear this armor is beginning to rust.”

      Chuckling, they continued the route through the old battlefield, sloshing through the muddy puddles of freezing rainwater. Looking to his right, he saw the gaping hole in the stone wall where the ambush had taken place. It truly was a sad day for Ravenwood. The draconian’s had bombarded the wall with meteors before it finally gave in, creating a jagged hole, where the stone was blasted from. Shaking that memory out, they continued with their lonely trek. Rounding the bend, they began to approach the portal, a glimmering picture of the adjacent area that was connected. About fifty feet back from him, he saw a dark shadow move across the carnage of the battlefield. Slowly turning, he saw a dark lumbering shape begin to run at him. Crying out, he stumbled back then tripped over a fallen pillar. Yelling to his comrades, he shouted “RUN! Get to the porta-“He yelled just before the shadowy hand reached down and the world went black.



      Chapter 1


      The day rolled in and out, very much the same for Luke swiftriver, pretty much the same as every other. Prepare for any draconian assault. Several days in a row now, hordes of Draconian’s have charged through the defenses, destroying equipment and armor, and once they were done, they simply vanished into the shadows of the sinking sun. Some of the worst hits were when a giant Fire Dragon smashed through the defense and began burning there supplies, food, and even some of the medical supplies. A common thought now was ‘When will they hit next, and do we have the strength repel them? Just a typical day. Hearing the patter of rain falling on canvas roof of the tent, Luke slowly yawned as he stretched his arms. Hearing a bone cracking thunderclap pass right overhead of him, he slowly rubbed his eyes. ‘Probably was a wild bolt’ he murmured to no one In particular. “Hard to tell if its morning or night in this place” he said still groggy with sleep. “Not with all the clouds and ash up there.” Yawing, he got out of his bed, which consisted of a hammock stretched between two think tent poles. Feeling a nudge against his leg, he looked down to see his pet storm hound , Sparky holding a message for him in his jaw. Hopefully he wasn’t to hungry yet, messages could get a bit messy before breakfast. “Thank you Sparky! Here have breakfast than go play with Alex’s hydra, for while I go see if we still have a command center.” luke said as tossed him a couple of hambroisa’s. Sparky quickly tore apart the meal, then scampered off to go see his friend. Looking down at the message, Luke began to read it. It said:

      ‘The draconians have taken over the plaza of conquests. We need to try and take it back before they resurrect the 4 great demons. –Sincerely, Alex BattleBlade- Ps meet me in the command center. And no it hasn’t been destroyed by a stormzilla yet.

      Chuckling at the last remark, Luke walked out of the tent into the slight drizzle of rain after the previous downpour they had last night, then out into the grand chasm. Setting a brisk pace, he walked towards the middle tower, the one with the slightly cracked brickwork walls and relatively safe upper floors and walked through the small doorway.

      Alex was there, pouring over some slightly damp maps of dragonspyre. John, was talking to a fellow life wizard. Alex motioned Luke to come. “So they really have it now?” Luke asked groggily.

      “Yes and scouts report they have set it up as an base camp so there is no way we can get that back now” Replied Alex, frowning at a slightly damp edge of the parchment.

      At that moment, John came over. “Bad news, Cyrus is still more of less injured from his encounter with Andar BristleBack so he needs still a bit of healing still so I am sending him over to wizard city. Hopefully he will get out soon.”

      “Great, just great, first the general now Cyrus,” Alex answered frowning again as he looked up.

      “Well what do we do now? Probably try and take back-“Luke began to say but a loud explosion followed by a tremor shook the very ground of the base.



      here hope ya like it, this is also a coninutating from alex battleblades story, Taking Back Dragonspyre check it out, its a good story to :P feel free to post feedback. Also this is a redo of the previous story i started called Defending Dragonspyre
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      Re: War of the worlds

      Luke best chapter you have made yet! And i know the next one gonna be even better.Keep on thinking great ideas.




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      Re: War of the worlds

      GREAT STORY! It may be better than mine XD.

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      Re: War of the worlds

      Thank you john and alex, i really appreciate it :D Btw i will be adding character forms after next chapter for anyone who wants to be in.
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      Re: War of the worlds

      YAY! Story! PUT CHAPTERS EVERY FIVE SECONDS! XD jk. Nice story though.

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      Re: War of the worlds

      O. O! thats kinda a lot of writing but i will try to get one or too chapters a day, maybe three on good days :D
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      Re: War of the worlds

      Also! i need ideas! feel free to post your ideas and i may incorperate them into the story :D the character forms however are coming next chapter,
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      Re: War of the worlds

      Also here is the next chapter.


      Chapter 2


      The flaming chunk of burning stone flew right past the makeshift hospital, clipping the side wall and ramming right through to a tower, where on impact it burst into a blazing red flame before the stone tower groaned and began to tip over, and crashed to the ground, and a huge dust cloud rose from the burning embers. The soldiers stood for a second, staring at the blazing pile of rock and stone before getting jarred into action. They grabbed their sharpened swords, and charged headlong into the enemy. The opposition consisted of around two hundred draconian foot soldiers, and roughly a hundred mages. They begin to charge, their soldiers yelling with their swords raised high, and all too soon did the battle cries and the clatter of steel on steel did the group dash out to see the armies already in full swing. Luke dashed forwards, he vaulted over the small wall and sent a flash of lighting out at several draconian’s, were vaporized on contact.” Surround the right flank and cut them off!” Luke yelled to a nearby commander as they dashed into battle

      “Aim for the flanks!” Alex yelled and john charged after Luke.

      The battle still rages hours into the initial combat. Neither side was willing to give in. In the midst of it, Alex was cutting down draconian with nova’s, and his wickedly sharp blade. Casting a quick nova, he hurtled it towards some draconian, slamming them into the brick wall, throwing them through it with a shower of shattered bricks and dust. Casting centaurs to protect him from the enemies, John was with the other healers, getting our wounded back to the makeshift hospital. Blasting draconian with lighting and waves, Luke cast a typhoon, a whirling ball of wind and water, and caught several draconians in its powerful grip and sent them flying through a hopefully abandoned house and through the wall behind it. The battle was going relatively well until some of the gurtok demons arrived. The giant shadowy figures slashed and pummeled their way throughout the defensive lines as and continued on towards the healers. “Luke! Stop Them!” John yelled to Luke over the chaos of battle.

      Quickly casting another huge typhoon, quickly followed by several tempests in quick sucession, they threw several of the gurtoks back before getting hit with the massive waves of the tempests, making several fall to the ground and turn into black dust. Only a few remained when john yelled “Now Alex!” and Alex let loose with a barrage of Flaming nova’s towards the demons.

      The few remaining were already weak and were hit square on and thrown backwards into a wall, and fell down onto the dusty street. A fire wizard approached them to finish them with a immolate already crackling in his hand when suddenly one roared and lashed out at him with its shadowy fist. “NOOO!” Alex yells as the fire wizard is thrown backwards into the stone house some 50 feet away, as he crashed into it, the rock wall was obliterated leaving a groaning roof before it too crashed to the ground.

      The draconian leader, seeing the backup obliterated, wisely decided to abandon this attack on the old tower. Not much they could do anyway right now, and signaled the retreat. After disposing of the remaining Gurtoks, he began to sprint over to the collapsed house the fire wizard was thrown into. Gently lifting the roof and bricks upwards he saw the broken body of the fire wizard, fire still burning in his lifeless hands.

      “Alex, I saw what happened!” exclaimed Luke as he ran over. “If he is still alive maybe john can-“he didn’t finish his sentence because he had just caught sight of the body.”May he be at peace.”Luke said and Alex gently lowered the ruins of the house back down, and the fire began to lick up the dry wooden beams, and before long, the blazing fire of the house was burning bright, long into the night.





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      Awesome chapter. that was sad what happened to the fire wizard though but it least he can just relaxe now.

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      Re: War of the worlds

      yea but you cant have a war without some causulties,
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