Saving the Spiral

  1. Chapter One: Away!

    Key
    Black: Is made up crazy by me to connect and add to the story.
    Blue: Word for word what the dialog said on the date this is posted.

    Red: Small edits, mostly changing you to he, him to flow with the story writing style.
    ***Blue note: For the test, I edited the comas, question marks in to make it more readable

    Chapter One
    Away!


    Blake pulls his backpack on and slips out the window. His parents were gone and he was on his own. He had
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    Updated 6-3-16 at 5:18:03 AM by Spellbinder

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